the abysmal descent

Very nice indeed!! Very powerful piece…especially the thoughts it evokes of depression and possible mental health problems!!!

unfiltered from the heart

the dive began over a week ago.

moments of bliss intermix,

Lucid dreams, sweet bliss

Now seem just a memory.

Diving headlong, how far

Down the rabbit hole

Before I forget how to

find my way back home?

~~

The pressure of the

Benthic zone presses

On bones and ears.

The pain, not quite excruciating

Makes it hard to hear my muse.

Left dazed and somewhat confused.

Resisting the surrender.

The very thing I know

To be the key to my release

And return to the surface

To breathe again

To see with emerald eyes again

To feel bliss again

(Know friends I’m slowly ascending)

•••

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2 comments

  1. tiffanybeingfree · March 1, 2016

    Thank you for the nod!

    Like

  2. Markgtr · March 27, 2016

    Great writing

    Liked by 1 person

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